Thursday, December 12, 2013

A Book Review: Love, Aubrey by Suzanne Lafleur

Love, Aubrey is the best, most amazing, saddest book ever written. And I mean it. You will never regret reading it! The writing is so capitivating; you feel both Aubrey’s happiness and sadness. You feel so bad for her, and you can’t stop reading until the last page, when you find out the outcome. It will keep you thinking long after the last page and I’d say the only thing wrong is you’ll go crazy wanting a sequel so you can hear more of Aubrey’s future life! 

The story is about eleven-year-old Aubrey. Her dad and little sister, Savannah, have just died in a car accident, and her mom, crazed with grief, abandoned her. Left alone in her house, Aubrey lives alone for a week—until Gram comes to take her home to Vermont. 
At home, Aubrey’s friends had abandoned her, she was living by herself with nobody to watch her, and she hated school. Here in Vermont, she goes to a nice school, lives with her caring grandmother, and has a new best friend, Bridget. But the emptiness from the loss of her family is still there. They’ve been searching for her mom for a long time with no clues. Why would her mom just….leave?

Wow—it is just a beautiful book. It takes true talent to write a book so good it makes you want to cry. Read it! You will never regret it, and you will never forget Aubrey’s story. Reading her memories, you start to miss Savannah, too, even though you never knew her. 

Love, Aubrey definitely deserves five stars. It’s the most amazing book you’ll ever read. 

Thursday, December 5, 2013

Writing Tip #3: The Editing Process

The editing process. It can be hard. It can be difficult. But it can also be very exciting. When you’re editing, you have power to change everything and anything.  You can change the starting point and ending point. You can change characters, add characters, delete characters. You can add and delete chapters. The point of the editing process? It’s to make the book the very best it can be.
So here’s my top secret (not really) tips on making your story the best.

1: Your first attempt will never work as a book.
That’s the hard fact. The first try, the first attempt, most likely is going to stink. (Mine always do.) What’s the point of the first draft, then? To get the story finished. Don’t worry about grammar. Don’t worry about editing-along-the-way. Don’t worry about names, chapters, or if it makes sense. When you’re writing your first draft, you have 1 goal and one goal only, and that is to get it done.
Once your first draft is finished, I highly advise starting a new draft and rewriting the story—this time, worrying about all those things I told you not to worry about. Can you still use your great sentences from the first one? Sure. But make sure they really are great sentences first.

2: Feel free to change the story around!
Once you have a second draft finished, you may have a great idea for a new plot twist. If that happens in the middle, feel absolutely free to start again on a third draft. You may think your story is working fine and you don’t need a third draft. If so, consider yourself amazingly talented, skilled, and lucky, because I can’t get a really good story until draft 4 or 5. Mostly because I keep coming up with better ideas. (LOL.)

3: Once you’re finished with it, set it aside!
This is EXTREMELY important. When you have a draft that you think works, put it aside and DO NOT LOOK at it for at least a week. Why? Because after a week, when you look at it, you will find more mistakes or things you can improve. I can pretty much guarantee it. You should just see my third draft of The Hidden Amethyst, which I thought was the final one. It’s hilarious. I had a chapter where Amethyst (called Eliza then) and her friends are almost run over with an airplane! Not only was it totally unrealistic, it was ridiculous. I also had the Mochas be good people, because I added them in afterwords to get the names in—which leads me to number 4.

4: Do Not Get Lazy!
I got lazy in my third draft of The Hidden Amethyst. How it went was: I wrote all about “Eliza” and her friends walking along having an adventure and I’m sure I had multiple descriptions of their raggedy clothes in there. So later on, I add in the Mocha family because I need to get my friend Avery’s name in there, and my story leads to the Mochas giving them all these clothes. The problem is, later on, they have ragged clothes and I knew it. I got lazy. Instead of finding all those descriptions of their clothes and changing them, which would have been the better idea, I just wrote a chapter where they get robbed. Pathetic, right? DO NOT DO THIS. Obviously, when I went back to re-edit (that’s where Eliza became Amethyst) I deleted that part out, in the process making the Mochas evil. My whole third draft, come to think of it, is just me getting lazy. So take that as a lesson: if you find an issue like the one above with an easy way to get rid of it and a hard way, generally, the hard way will get you a better story.



These are the tips I’m following myself as I work through my next book, which should release next August. Hope they were helpful to you!

Wednesday, December 4, 2013

Avery Mocha



                                                        Name:
                                                      Avery Mocha

Birthday: 
 July 12

Personalities: 
Cautious, reluctant, kind; a follower

Greatest wish:
For her mom (Jenny Mocha) to become good

Best Moment:
  When she came to Dr. 
Sawyer’s office to
                                                     apologize to Amethyst



Thursday, October 24, 2013

Book Review: Eight Keys by Suzanne Lafleur


Eight Keys by Suzanne Lafleur is a beautiful book with a great writing style⎯but what book by Suzanne Lafleur isn’t? I just finished re-reading it for like the hundredth time and it currently is my favorite book! **SPOILERS AHEAD**

The story is about a girl named Elise. Elise’s parents died when she was young, so she lives with her Aunt Bessie and Uncle Hugh. In the beginning of the book, Elise starts middle school, and suddenly everything is different. After an unfortunate incident in the woods, she has become the target for bullying and teasing at her new school, particularly by her locker partner, who finds immense fun in ruining her lunch every day. Elise always had her best friend Franklin to turn to, but now, to Elise, he seems babyish and is unintentionally embarrassing her. At the same time, her aunt’s sister Annie and her baby daughter Ava move into Elise’s house, seeming to interrupt and sometimes ruin her wonderful life with her aunt and uncle. Things just keep getting worse⎯until Elise finds a key. A key with her name on it. A key that starts an adventure of discoveries. A key that unlocks one of the upstairs rooms in the barn, rooms that have been locked up for as long as Elise can remember....

I was reading reviews on this book and it seemed to me like one thing people didn’t like was that it seemed to them like the message going over was “Telling an adult about a bully doesn’t help.” They didn’t like that message. However, I don’t see that message at all. When Elise tells her teacher, I can agree that her teacher doesn’t seem to care the first and second times; but when she tells her aunt and uncle, they do do something about it— they give her advice on how to handle it. Maybe some readers wanted Aunt Bessie and Uncle Hugh to go storm to the school and demand Elise be treated fairly. But in reality, maybe they wanted Elise to try to manage it herself, for her to have courage to stand up for herself. And that is a definite message that is sent.

Personally, I can not find anything I do not like about this book! Everything Elise endures—whether it’s good or bad—winds together and twists together to create one unforgettable story of mystery, friendships, and a few keys that happen to unlock secrets from the past. I can guarantee this is a book you will never regret reading.

Wednesday, October 9, 2013

A Book Review: Listening for Lucca by Suzanne Lafleur



Wow! I finished this book not so long ago, and wow it is a fantastic book! It had an element of fantasy to it, yet was realistic enough to seem like real life. Siena’s story seems like it could be easily real. **SPOILERS AHEAD**

The story is: Siena is not your everyday, normal 13-year-old. Ever since her two-year-old brother Lucca stopped talking for reasons no doctor can explain, she’s started a collection of old, abandoned things. Siena also has visions of the past and has been dreaming of a house by the sea—not daydreaming, but literal, when-she’s-asleep dreaming. When her family decides to move, they find an old house that strikingly resembles the one from Siena’s dream. When they get there, Siena discovers a pen marked with the initials SEA—and when she uses it to write in an old journal, the pen writes its own story, about a girl named Sarah who lived in the same house during World War II! As time goes on and Siena starts finding items from Sarah’s story, she discovers that, like Lucca, Sarah stopped talking. Did she ever talk again? Could she be the key to unlocking Lucca’s voice?

I think it was a great story and fantastic writing! I will note that it is a bit higher reading level than Love, Aubrey and Eight Keys (Suzanne Lafleur’s other books), and it has a couple of more mature concepts (the main character is a teenager, after all).
My favorite parts were: when Siena finds the clues from the past relating to Sarah, and of course, when Lucca starts to talk! When he does it is such amazing writing. You have come to love Siena and Lucca at this point, so when he says the first words you’ve heard him say, it’s first breathtaking, then you just want to grin and laugh. And it also adds to the mysterious element.

I have to say, the only thing at first I was unsure about was: There is some “ghost” sections in the story, in terms of, Siena, using her visions-of-the-past power, goes into Sarah’s body, back in time to the house when it was Sarah’s, and talks back in time to Sarah’s big brother Joshua. As I said, at first I was unsure about it—but it all merged together in the end and made the story even better, so no complaints!

Ending note: Amazing, amazing, amazing story. If you haven’t read it already (which I hope you have, if you’re reading this, because I just gave away part of the story) definitely go for it. I recommend this book to anybody ages 9 & up. It most definitely does not deserve five stars. It deserves ten. ;) 

Thursday, September 12, 2013

The Question Everyone's Asking...

So the question everyone's been asking is: When is your next book coming out?
Well, here's a quick update!

I AM planning on publishing another book, and: I am just about finished with my first draft! (Yay!) I have been working on it since April or May. I have started a LOT of drafts this year that have failed, but this one (yay, yay, yay) works! It is NOT going to be a sequel to The Hidden Amethyst, but a different story. However, after this book, I am planning on writing a sequel.

As I said, I am on the brink of finishing it, I should today or tomorrow. (Sorry, I don't have any titles to share yet.) However, do not get your hopes up; the book will not be out for probably another year. 

After I finish it, the next big step is rewriting and editing. I have to make sure it all lines up, the story makes sense, I probably will have to delete and add characters, change characters' names, and then rewriting sections that don't work.

And then my parents and I have to go through it, and then there's the formatting process...The good news is: I was planning for my release date to be next August, but I was also originally planning to get the first draft finished by Christmas. The fact that I'm nearly finished now means it should be out sooner!! :) I'll let you know when we have a release date.




Thursday, August 22, 2013

Emily




Name: 
Emily

Birthday:
February 9

Personalities:
Shy, quiet, and kind, yet brave

Best Moment:
When she & Josh helped distract Mahalia


Tuesday, August 6, 2013

The Biggest Surprise EVER!!

Oh my goodness! The bestest thing EVER happened to me yesterday!!!! I am SOOOO EXCITED!!

Suzanne Lafleur (aka my favorite author) sent me a free SIGNED COPY of her next book Listening for Lucca!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I didn't ask for it or anything, it was a total surprise! I just emailed her a couple times telling her how much I liked her books, and I mailed her a copy of my own book, and then this came in the mail!!!!! AND, in her note, she said she had read my book!!!!!! Talk about EXCITING!!!!!!! As I said the best thing that has ever happened to me! Thanks so much Miss Lafleur!!!! You're awesome (and you write awesome books)!!

I got it yesterday and already I am done reading it and: Listening for Lucca is simply the best book I have read all year!!!!!

If you haven't read anything by Suzanne Lafleur now is the time to do so!!!! She has 3 books out:
Eight Keys, Love, Aubrey, and now, Listening for Lucca. Read them you will not be disappointed!!!!!!!
Here is her website:

http://www.suzannelafleur.com



Sunday, July 28, 2013

A Book Review: A Series of Unfortunate Events



A Series of Unfortunate Events by Lemony Snicket is a great book series. Fantastic writing and an amazing storytelling voice! They were definitely fun books to read.

This is the story. The three Baudelaire children—Violet, Klaus, and Sunny—live in a mansion with their parents. At least, they did—in the first chapter, they are at the seashore by themselves when Mr. Poe, a family friend, comes and tells them their parents have perished in a fire that destroyed their home. The children are then placed in the care of Count Olaf, who is intent on one thing and that one thing is NOT raising orphans. It is getting the children’s fortune their parents left behind. And he will do that in any means necessary. The children do have some advantages: Violet is the best fourteen year old inventor. Klaus, who is 12, has read tons of books and he remembers everything he reads. And Sunny, who is just an infant, is known for her amazing biting skills.  But Count Olaf is their guardian, and has help from his whole acting troupe of vicious people—a hook-handed man, a bald man with a long nose, a person who looks neither man nor woman, and two white-faced women. 
After that, the children go from one home to the next. They have good guardians and bad ones. The one thing that remains the same is Count Olaf shows up in every book, in ridiculous-but-clever disguises, from Coach Genghis to Shirley the Receptionist to Detective Dupin. By the eighth book, the orphans are on their own, going from one place to the next, trying to figure out the secret of V.F.D. and the secret of their own lives.

There are a couple misunderstandings, I believe, from these books. One thing is, Lemony Snicket puts a lot of definitions in. Some don’t like this because they think that he is  treating readers like little kids by explaining some big words for them, but I believe that’s not true. The definitions aren’t meant to explain words; they’re part of the story. If you read the definitions correctly, most of them aren’t right from the dictionary; they aren’t meant to be. They are meant to add humor to the story and to get the point across. I would see that if he gave every word a definition it might get annoying, but there are never two definitions on the same page. There aren’t even two definitions on two pages. There’s a good distance between each one. 
Also, as I said before, it adds a bit of dry humor to the book. For example: on page 13 of The Bad Beginning it reads, ‘...over a dull dinner of boiled chicken, boiled potatoes and blanched—the word “blanched” here means “boiled”—string beans...’ Lemony Snicket didn’t define “blanched” as “boiled” simply because he didn’t think the readers wouldn’t know what it meant. He did it because it was creative and funny way to say that, in short, they had a completely boiled dinner, and it also helps to pronounce better the fact they had very boring and dull dinners in the Poe household. That is just his style.
Something else that I love about the whole series is, Lemony Snicket is so mysterious in his writing that he makes it sound as if the story is true. I’m not sure exactly how many times this happens in the first book, but I know it happens a lot on the later books: he switches over to first person, with the ‘I’ being himself. Only for a paragraph or less; but he makes it so convincing and very mysterious. Lemony Snicket talks about the places as if they once existed, as if they are still here, as if the Baudelaires are real people. A great storytelling method, in my opinion. Some people may find it annoying because he often interrupts the story, but for me, it’s one of the things I love about A Series of Unfortunate Events. 
Snicket warns you, too, from the first sentence in The Bad Beginning that it isn’t a happy story and that is completely true. It is fabulous writing and fabulous storytelling but the story itself is “rife with misfortune, misery, and despair.” However, I wouldn’t call it a sad story. It’s more like this: so many horrible things happen that it’s almost funny. Everything bad that can happen to these kids (besides being physically injured) has happened to them. They almost die several times throughout the series as well—and that’s another thing I wanted to say. 
During the whole series, horrible things happen and people do die. But the thing is: there is nothing gory or bad when this happens. When someone dies Snicket doesn’t go into detail. He doesn’t even say that so-and-so died straight out. He says other things that make it clear what happened. I also note I have only seen one bad word in the series, in book 2, and it was used by Count Olaf, and afterwords, Snicket basically apologized for Count Olaf’s language. Remember that Lemony Snicket is writing as if it is a true story and he wants it to seem as realistic as possible. Other than that, though, it is clear of any bad words.

There is only thing I must warn you of and that is: you will have a lot of questions when you are reading the series, and most of them will not be answered straight out. I think that if you study the series close enough, and read the extras from the website close enough, you can figure it out, but you can’t just flip through it and figure it out.
To end this review: I think it is a wholesome, fun book, though a lot of scary things happen. I would recommend not just The Bad Beginning but the whole series to anyone ages 8 & up. I love Lemony Snicket’s writing style and the mystery element, but I must warn you, just like the first page says: there is no happy ending. The entire book is full of misfortune— “misfortune,” here meaning “lots of unfortunateness for the Baudelaire orphans.” ;)

Monday, July 1, 2013

Josh


Name:
 Josh

Birthday: 
March 5

Personalities:
Confident, bold, a leader, a problem-solver

Best Moment: 
When he helped Amethyst fool the evil fairies that they’d not found the Ring

Greatest Wish:
To have another boy in the group
to hang out with

June Update


Hey friends!

I noticed I'm a little behind on writing tips, and I'm sorry. So far my summer has been super-super busy, but I'll try to get to it more. And more book reviews, too ;) 

Anyway, I know you'll all be glad to know I've been working hard on my next book! It will not be a sequel to The Hidden Amethyst, but a totally different story. It really wasn't going so good...I had like seven started stories that didn't work out, so until this morning I had no story. But then this afternoon I was looking through my started drafts and saw one and I was like, Hey! That'll work! I'm not going to reveal the story or title in case the story flops (which I hope it does not).
So a built-in writing tip here: If you get stuck with your stories, here’s 3 options:
  1. Write junk.
  2. Work on something you WANT to write really badly, even if you know it won’t work.
  3. Take a break from writing for a couple days to a week.

So on my Links page, there is a link for The Homeschool Gazette. Since I never really talked about it, I will now. The Gazette is a website for kids (not just for homeschoolers!) that my friend created. I write for it, as do a couple of my other friends. Awesome stuff there: jokes, recipes, short stories, reviews, educational stuff, and fashion tips! For boys and girls!. Plus I want to give a BIG THANK YOU to the Gazette and to Joy for reviewing my book!!!!! Woohoo! Joy you're awesome!! 
Click here to check out the Gazette! And if you can, please comment on your favorite posts!

Anyway I think that is all! Thanks for reading my blog, and yes, more character files and writing tips are coming! 

Sunday, June 30, 2013

Book Review: A Year Without Autumn by Liz Kessler


A Year Without Autumn is a novel by Liz Kessler about a girl named Jenni. Jenni always goes to stay in a condo for vacation every year, and her best friend Autumn always goes too. But when she’s on vacation, she goes in an old elevator up to Autumn’s floor that her condo is on,  and when she steps out, it is a year later and disaster has struck Autumn’s family! Jenni must find a way to get back to the present time to stop the disaster from happening. This is definitely one of my favorite books. It is sad in some parts, but in other parts it is really funny! I would give this book 5 out of 5 years! 

Monday, June 3, 2013

Book Review: The Wingfeather Saga


The Wingfeather Saga is a three, soon to be four, book set by Andrew Peterson. Set in the imaginary world of Aerwier, we meet the Igibys—Nia, the mother; Podo, the grandfather; and the children, Janner, Tink, and Leeli. They live in Glipwood, in the country of Skree, right off the Dark Sea of Darkness. Life is good—besides the cruel, evil Fangs of Dang patrolling around every corner. Besides the dreaded Black Carriage that comes and takes children away across the Dark Sea, never to be seen again. 
The Igibys thought their life was fairly normal. But when the Fangs come after them, demanding the Lost Jewels of Anneria (a legendary kingdom across the Dark Sea), suddenly their life is anything but normal. To save their lives, they have to attack and even kill some Fangs. And the other times, it is the mysterious Peet the Sock Man who saves them. But all that is happening is: more Fangs are coming for them. So the Igibys must flee; but to where? All the free countries of Skree have been conquered by Fangs. Maybe it’s Anneria where they need to go......

Spread throughout three action-paced, danger-filled books: On the Edge of the Dark Sea of Darkness, North! Or Be Eaten, and The Monster in the Hollows, (which are to be read in that order, please) the Wingfeather Saga is a series you do not want to miss. Impossible-to-put-down adventures, with rich descriptions and lots of mystery, from the evil Fangs to mysterious Peet the Sock Man to sweet, crippled Leeli—full of dangerous animals, too, including toothy cows and horned hounds and the very annoying thwaps....I thoroughly enjoyed all three books in the Saga and I am very excited to see how it is concluded in book four, The Warden and the Wolf King, which should be out soon!!! I give the Wingfeather Saga 5, out of 5 whistleharps!  

Click Here for Andrew Peterson's website!

Friday, May 31, 2013

Emmy & Rachel

 Name: 
Emmy

Birthday:
June 13

Personalities:
Loud, troublesome, adorable

Greatest Wish: 
To be able to do whatever she wants whenever she wants


Name:
Rachel

Birthday: 
June 13

Personalities:
Shy but loud, troublesome, a follower

Best Moment: 
When she & Emmy insulted Mahalia.

“She’s Lucy,” said Emmy. “You do know name-calling is hurtful?” 
“Yes it is, Ello,” said Mahalia teasingly.
“My name is Emmy,” said Emmy. She was getting mad. “That’s to you, Calia-balia!” “Calia-balia, calia-balia,” sang Rachel.


Monday, May 27, 2013

Writing Tip #2: Beginnings



Four words: Beginnings change A LOT.
I mean A LOT. The current beginning of The Hidden Amethyst is actually my fourth beginning. Seriously: my first-ever beginning goes like this:

Eliza bent over, hoping no one had spotted her. Too late. The manager of the asylum, Ms. Ursula, saw her. "Eliza Butternut," she said, tugging Eliza's waist-belt, "You know better than to go out and hide. The train will leave this morning. You will ride."

Can you see how much has changed since then? Even Amethyst’s name—as you can see, it’s Eliza there. I wrote this beginning probably three or four years ago. 
 Here’s the actual, final beginning of The Hidden Amethyst:

The day started out badly. First of all, Amethyst woke up late. When she woke she was faced with the headmistress‘ wrinkled old face, which was glaring at her. Amethyst shrieked.

Can you see how much it has changed? Names have changed. She’s in the asylum still, but in the first, the train’s about to leave. In the final beginning, she’s just waking up―no train is leaving yet.

Alright, you’re probably sick of examples. Down to the basics.
First: Don’t make beginnings too long. Well, you can have long beginnings, but then it depends on what you think of when you think of “beginning”. Is it the first paragraph? First chapter? First seven chapters? (That would probably be too long.) Here’s one easy and simple way to look at it. The beginning is what happens before the first main thing happens. I know that sounds strange and confusing, so let me take an example from my book. If you looked at it the way I just said, then the beginning is what happens to Amethyst before she is put on the train (the first main thing). In that case, my beginning’s three chapters. But it all depends on the story; some stories work better with longer beginnings, some shorter.

Secondly: Beginnings need to be interesting. It needs to draw in the reader with the first sentence. It doesn’t have to start with action necessarily; it just has to make the reader keep reading, whether it’s because they’re worried or curious to find out what happens next. Like I said, it doesn’t need to start with action all the time; just with something minor happening.
 When I say minor, I mean something that is happening that doesn’t relate much to the plot, it just gets the story going, develops the setting or characters, or helps lead up to the first main thing. In my case, my beginning helps develop these facts: 1, the headmistress Miss Odelia is very cruel and uncaring, and 2, Amethyst doesn’t like living at the asylum at all. And it helps merges into Amethyst going on the orphan train.
Or: you can have minor happenings that foreshadow. Things happen that seem unimportant to the reader, but really they’re foreshadowing what is going to happen.
So to sum that up: I’d advise you to begin with minor happenings, then merge those into the first main happening. In my book, there are minor happenings after minor happenings the first three chapters, and they all help lead up to the first main thing (Amethyst being put on the orphan train), and helping develop the setting (the asylum) and the characters.

If you have trouble merging, my best tip would be keep writing. Make more things happen, and see where your writing takes you. Don’t worry about anything like staying within a word limit. Just write, and see where it takes you—and maybe you will find one of your minor happenings actually turn out to be a main happening! Don’t be afraid of changing your story. If you stick to one guideline and don’t let yourself branch out, you’ll get a good story, but not the best; you’ll miss out on ideas you would’ve gotten had you just seen where you story takes you.
I know sometimes it seems like beginnings are impossibly hard and difficult. But here’s a way to make it easy:
 Write a sentence. Any sentence. It can be, “There are chocolates on the counter.” It can be “I wish I had an iPad.” Or it can be “Amber jumped up and down, screaming in delight,” as if it were a story. Then imagine it’s the beginning of a book, and keep writing. What happens to those chocolates on the counter? Are they melting? What kind of chocolates are they? Has one fallen off the counter onto the floor, and ants have snuck inside to eat it? Or are the chocolates outside to begin with, and ants are already eating it? Who will discover the perfectly good chocolates being wasted by ants? Will it be the responsible twelve-year-old? Will she be mad? Sad? Hey—that’s the beginning of a story idea! See how easy that can be? Just think of questions, then answer them, and you might get a beginning. Or just write!
Beginnings can be hard. But if you try, you can make them fun.

Monday, May 13, 2013

Writing Tip #1: Naming Your Characters



Characters’ names play a very important role in your story or book. You need the perfect name. For example, what if I’d named Mahalia ‘Elise’? ‘Elise’ doesn’t sound like an evil fairy name, but Mahalia does. (Note: If any of you readers are actually named Mahalia, no offense.)
Or what about Eugenia? Suppose I’d named her Sarah?

You may be wondering where I got all the names in my book. Well, for most the evil fairies, I got them from this website:
It’s just a random name generator, but it worked for me. 

Besides all that, you need names that fit your characters. For example, I chose the name ‘Lucy’ for a six-year-old orphan girl in my book because it sounded like a poor little girl’s name. What if I’d named her Nancy? It doesn’t have the same effect; it wouldn’t had worked as well. 
About changing character’s names— it’s never too late to change them (unless you’ve already written books about them;) During the writing process, you can change them many times if the names don’t sound right. I did. Almost every one of my characters has had a different name at some point—and some characters have had two different names.

Speaking of such, I named almost all my characters after my friends. You may want to do that, too, with your friends. You can; but it depends on the setting. You can’t name your main character Madison if the story takes place three hundred years ago; the name wasn’t around then (as a first name, of course). But that doesn’t mean you can still base the character on your friend! Or you could temporarily name the character after your friend, and switch it later. The bad thing about that is, sometimes you don’t want to switch—but depending on the setting, you’ll have to.
If it fits your story, I think it is a great idea to name your characters after your friends or family. When you’re writing and you see your best friend’s name in the story, you can feel the story so much more; you can put more emotion into the story; really make it come alive. That is the upside. The downside, of course, is you don’t want anything bad to happen to them, for two reasons:  One, because when you write it, you don’t see the bad thing happening to your character; you see it happening to your friend, and of course you don’t want anything bad to happen to your friend. And two, you get worried about what the friend the character is named after will think. You make something horrible happen to your best friend Addie’s character, then delete it all because you think, What will Addie think? 

Here’s the thing, fellow writers.The hard fact is that if your whole story revolves around what your friends will think, it will not be a good story. I’m not saying that you should avoid your friends, ignore their opinions, and make bad thing after bad thing happen to their characters—actually, it’s a great idea to get your friends’ opinions. In fact, one of my best friends is now helping me with my next book. Like an editor/advisor. A lot of my other friends are helping, too, with proofreading and illustrating and advertising. The point? It’s a great idea to have your friends help you. Just don’t let your story revolve around what they will think about their character. If it’s too much trouble, just don’t put their name in at all, or give them a small part.
Dealing with number 1 can be more of a problem, sometimes. You don’t want anything bad to happen to those certain characters named after your friends; and if nothing bad happens in the story, it’s not going to be a great story. If you’re struggling with 1, think of it this way—the bad thing isn’t happening to your friend; it’s happening to a character named after your friend. 

So to sum up all I’ve said: naming characters can be difficult, but it’s not impossible. And it’s always fun. 

Saturday, May 11, 2013

Steve Mocha

                  Name:
               Steve Mocha

                Birthday:

                  April 10

              Personalities:

Sneaky, sly, cheerful, helpful

             Greatest Wish: 

For Avery and his mom to join the good side with him

May Update

Hello, friends!

I had a book-talk at the library last week. It was awesome!  I talked about how I got started writing, the publishing process, and gave some writing tips. I found out I really enjoy public speaking and hope to do more.

Also-all those awesome illustrations of the characters in the character profiles were done by the amazing Angel Dash. If you think her drawings rock (like I do), then check out her drawing blog:

http://therandomarts.blogspot.com

And yes, if you're wondering, more character profiles are coming. 

Friday, March 8, 2013

Angelica


 

                    Name:
                   Angelica

                   Birthday: 
                    May 26

               Personalities: 
     A leader, responsible, levelheaded

                  Best Moment: 
When they were rescuing Mary and Lucy, and she suggested using the ring

Courtney

Name:
Courtney

Personalities: 
Practical, motherly, patient

Birthday: 
July 23

      Greatest Wish: 
for McKenna to stop annoying her


Tuesday, February 19, 2013

Finding Something Special

So, guess what?
I was at my library the other day when I checked out the New shelf.
THE HIDDEN AMETHYST WAS THERE!
It was awesome, I didn't even know they had put it on the shelves until I saw it.
This has been my dream since I was six, it's amazing it's a reality now!!!
Here's the best part. I went back to the library a few days later and it was gone. Translation: SOMEBODY CHECKED IT OUT!!!!!

Friday, January 18, 2013

Thanks, Friends!

As I mentioned in an earlier post, all the money we raise through the sale of the book we are donating to World Vision. The money will go to buying school supplies and books for kids in other countries:

http://tinyurl.com/bgfdf9k

So far, I have sold 20 books on Amazon, and I just ran out of my first order, which was 40 books. Wow! Where did they all go? I was so excited about how many people bought a copy and I had no idea how many books I would be signing. And since I still have friends who don't have copies, I had to place another order.

Thank you to everybody who has donated to this cause! It means so much to me.

McKENNA

Name:    
McKenna
Birthday: 
June 21
Best Moment: 
When she discovered the door was unlocked
Personalities: 
Humorous, stubborn, daring
Greatest Wish: 
For Courtney to laugh at her jokes

Thursday, January 10, 2013

Scene Drawings

This is 9-year-old Stephen B's drawing. He calls it "Fire hair". The girl pointing is McKenna yelling, "Bad fairies coming from the east!"

Monday, January 7, 2013

Amethyst

Name:
Amethyst Butternut

Birthday:
February 24

  Siblings:
 Emerald, Sapphire,Topaz, Opal

 Personalities: 
A leader, determined, quiet, brave

Greatest Wish: 
For all evil to be gone

Thursday, January 3, 2013

It's More Official!

Guess what!!!! Yesterday I said soon The Hidden Amethyst would go on Amazon.
Can you guess why I'm posting?

IT'S ON AMAZON!!!!!

This means it is official!!!! My book is officially published! I am an official author!!

Here's the link.

The Hidden Amethyst on Amazon!

Please check it out if you get the chance.

I will start posting character files next week!

Wednesday, January 2, 2013

It's Official!


Guess what? So I had to order another proof, and it came today!! We approved it!!!!!! It’s on CreateSpace’s website, available for sale right now!!!  
And in the next week it’ll be on Amazon as well!!! I can’t believe it! I am a real author now! 
I have some more exciting news! I am using all the proceeds from this book to raise money for a special cause. I will be helping to buy school supplies for students in poor countries, through World Vision:
I’m hoping to raise $200. I was looking at the website, and the money I raise will go sooooo far in helping children learn. 

Happy New Year!  So far 2013 has been awesome!